I really liked this but I think one thing that can turn people off is when the video is like 50 60 seconds in length, and the intro cards are 20 seconds, comprising almost half the movie. that being said i loved the intro card sequence and I would say the contents of the movie being a little longer might help it. I think the pacing of the intro cards were really good, and the pacing of the statue of liberty scene onwards was really good. I think when the finger went to his nose the sound was a little awkward and the pink tunnel effect was a little awkward, in comparison to the rest of the scenes. also i noticed as the finger falls into the hole it kind of makes it look like it detaches from the hand, another small detail that might come across as awkward to someone. the finger tunneling through the nose is a really funny idea but is sort of slowly paced and disengaging maybe, although i did find it kind of funny. I think something else that I found funny was how the finger knocked down the two characters inside the nose, and the way they just fell off the screen, but i think conventionally viewers might also see that as a little odd or less eye grabbing. I think the atmosphere was really fucking eerie funny and cool and seeing that it was a zappa song at the end I was like ohhh nice! Another thing that maybe would meld the whole project together would be when he bites giving it sort of a crunch, the frame by frame animation right there was astounding but with no sound effect it doesnt grab you as much, and it looks like he is taking a massive crunch, so grab the viewer. That all being said, this was really great and there was a lot of really nice smooth and cleanly drawn characters and motion here