Boss's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[chonk]

this is clean, compact enough with a good composition/balance of shapes. i know its not that deep but since the title is chonk it looks like you fit the aesthetic well. i could maybe nitpick that this dude should have more color or webbing between his neck and shell because it would look more natural or nice there but honestly this is probably the pokemons design and i dont even know if its a pokemon or not for sure xD

DanShimmershell responds:

Yer I feel like I should have put a little more on the neck. But yer it's a Torkoal. I tend to make the pokemon I do a little different from the base designs because it's more fun that way. But thanks for the feedback!

[Flying Amanita]

Always vote 5 for reppin amanita good looks

sphinxcreations responds:

Thank you!

[Cycles]

this is trippy. this kinda looks like what they say dmt looks like when you warp into a nother dimension

ComposerAustouso responds:

I aimed well then

[Highway to Heavens!]

This is a really awesome colorful display of multiple characters with a clear polished style

AlecsHere responds:

♡♡ UwU ♡♡

[My demonsona]

the colors on this are really nice. i think more people might be drawn to it if you blend the lines that look like was part of your outline sketch into something that makes it look more finished/polished even though i like it a lot how it is. the outlines on this one really contain and capture the colors especially around the hair really nicely and would be cool to see you use more outline work to encapsulate and show off how rad the colors are because it catches the eye more this way. upload more !!!

Tonxy94 responds:

Thank you for your critique.I do work on having my lineart and coloring be tidier or at least I am working on it to develop my style to do more than one type or style.

[Big Boobed Sunflower]

Its really nice and clean with perfectly simple lines, would maybe be good to have more detail somewhere that doesnt compromise how polished it seems, or polish in a way that gives it more depth while maintaining its conceptual simplicity, also background or something other than just blank white could be cool for this, i like this a lot and for the sake of the review actually didnt vote as high as i would if i was just mindlessly scrolling around and dropping votes on things so its pretty cool (not to mention funny)

Justyschultz responds:

Thank you for taking the time to give some criticism, I agree with it too! See, I really would have loved to do a background, the only problem is that the coloring didn't fill the lines up completely as you can see. So when I tried to give it a background, the light look you see now would be mixed up with a darker color. I don't know, I guess I could have just copied the white or made a white background under the color to keep that nice look.

And yeah, I think a few more petals would have been good to give it some more detail!
Thanks again for the criticism, it's people like you who take the time to comment that makes artist improve!

[Earthbound Sprite]

Really nice and impressive that it spins like this. would love to see what kind of world you would make for this (and ofc i love earthbound)

TickingGearz responds:

I love the Mother series so much, it's so good!
And thank you! This is an old design for one of my old characters!
I'll post the design tomorrow

[Symbiote Specimen #2: Carnage]

This is really cool. I love how the containment / bubble to protect the art blends together as one thing, it makes the preservation of the art seem a lot more conceptually functional.
this reminds me a ton of this dude called something dinobot i used to watch on youtube years ago, who did really cool custom symbiote toys. cant find his channel now which is a shame.
really nice detail work, I think its really creative the way he is just sort of a slime goop pile but with a neck and head with jaws coming up

Armorwing responds:

Shame you can't find that channel. It sounds interesting.

I didn't really think about protecting the sculpture, rather make it look like a containment cell for the alien. But considering how fragile Carnage here is, I;'m glad it does that.

Thank you for the great comment!

[La vida de tigressa]

This looks interesting but the pic is too blurry to read the story! Also the lack of backgrounds in most frames and changing background color fills makes for a colorful comic page, but not one that draws your eye in (though im sure my eye would be drawn in more if the pic was in focus so thats more of an upload execution aspect than the drawing itself) make more and try to take steadier pics!!

Elhabanero20 responds:

Okay thanks for the. Input and i will see what i can do.

[A art trade]

If this was cleaned up, not on lined paper, maybe the photo was edited to make it look less like just a picture or optimally if it was scanned, this would be the framework for a really good piece of art. The anatomy/composition and particular blockiness of the shapes fits well into the way people see cartoons nowadays, I think this image would actually be recognized as really nice and trendy, but like I said, being drawn on lined paper, taken a photo of it, isn't the best. Yes it looks like his neck is broken or something but that's really not that much to worry about,I think coloring it and cleaning up the spaces on the black areas where you can tell you scribbled it in would add more simple charm. While the pose looks a little unnatural, in a way since he is supposed to be swinging, it could be seen as natural and just the way the cartoon style is supposed to make it look. don't worry about being impressive, just enjoy what you do and keep drawing more

Rejectdoodles responds:

..........woah
This is the most criticsim That i got.its kinda overwhelming.
Yeah the lined paper is kinda distracting And really break the piece.
And i'm just too poor to buy scanners(my parents are poor).
I actually scared of coloring since i never did it well And linework Ain't my thing (i'm kinda of a perfectionist if a line ain't conpleted i have to completed) And it lents to me going out of like And as a solución just making the línea ticcer.
I want to be impresive since you kno it's tradicional art with monochromes And not super colored nicely looking digital art,i feel since i don't go digital (monetary reason, Argentina not the best economy) i need to make it more than just a character standing.
But thank for the review(tougth 3,5 Stars is a little to much in my opinión)