the colors on this are really nice. i think more people might be drawn to it if you blend the lines that look like was part of your outline sketch into something that makes it look more finished/polished even though i like it a lot how it is. the outlines on this one really contain and capture the colors especially around the hair really nicely and would be cool to see you use more outline work to encapsulate and show off how rad the colors are because it catches the eye more this way. upload more !!!