you give me tear to my eye such poetry
you give me tear to my eye such poetry
I will do my best to exceed your expectations in this competition. Shoutouts too Boss your art is sick if I make my first LP I would hire you to make my album cover your awesome.
The fact that I could understand what Pig was saying and where his rhymes matched up at the end of the bars quite a lot better than I could for Blest. Pigs flow was much better, his slow pace enabled him to easily bring in a flow of words that when rhymed matched up with the rhyme from the previous corresponding bar much more accurately than Blest had tried to do and fumbled in the attempt of in his second verse. In Blest's second verse he also pokes fun at Pig's slow rhyming which detracts from the punch of the insult since it is a very in-accurate insult. Rap battles are indeed a game of exaggerations but when you're beat somewhere don't bring it up; it does not make it better. Though Pig's stage performance can seem a little cheesey when he makes his jokes they are nonetheless enjoyable-- the boasts dispersed by Blest are clearly attempts to show how creative his rhymes can be while he rhymes numerous words. This tactic is often mistaken as actually good by some who rap, stringing together almost impressive series of rhymes when in the end they do not make complete sense compared to a slower rhyme put together with words that do not seem to show evidence of ultra creativity that the style of hyper-rhyming strives for--though it is for the better when the rhyming words string together to formulate a sentence which makes more sense creating a better verse. I vote for pigpen.
1 point for the beat
the beat was okay. these rappers were not. Hard to understand and I am not so sure if they were even making coherent rhymes.
do i hear
killer klown samples
i like to listen to this when im depressed
when im getting suicidal this song is a good reminder that hell is a tough place im not ready for yet
I guess that's good thanks for the comment
this is good as hell
it makes me very happyyyy
the first 2 bars were very good
the rest has space for improvement but it also is like beatnick poetry its good yo
PiG
Nimbus did appear to have better general flow but his lyrics don't really help him that much against PiG. Nimbus disses his name a lot which PiG points out then PiG disses Nimbus' family matters and jailtime shit and it worked very well.
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