the crazy cat noise was really cool, i also found the story became captivating but i felt i might have missed some information that made the plot resolution more dramatic and i was wondering if there was more to the story you would have added if you would have let it run longer. i think you could use your musical skills to give a narrated story like this more scene changes with atmosphere and pacing variations that might pull a viewer into the story more and it would be done well if you tried it